英文邮件里的语法问题

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英文邮件里的语法问题
我要给申请的学校发资讯邮件 但是不确定我写的有没有语法问题 拜托了!
Hi! I am an applicant of AST program of this year, and I already on the wait list. Because I am a international student and the expire date of my study permit is September 30th 2014, so, I just wondering if its possible, can I get the priority of the seat? Thank you very much! My student number is : A00900567

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你好,修改如下：Hi! I am an applicant of AST program in this year, and I`ve already been on the waiting list. Because I am an international student and the expire date of my study permission will end on September 30th 2014, I just wonder if I can get the priority of the seat if possible,could you please tell me? Thank you very much! My student number is : A00900567
满意请采纳,谢谢!