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Just as Josephine said,she would like to major in Journalism medium.But I would like to major in English.
It is because English is widely spoken and studied around the world.It plays a more and more important role in our society.It has a prominent practical value as an international language.Besides,in my mind,the most important reason is that I am a special interest in English.I would like to be engaged in with the English related work when I graduate university.
I think whatever subject you would like to major in when you study in university.The first thing you should think about is what subject you are interest in.I think it is very important.
On the other hand,I would like to study university in China.It is because I like to move away Macao and try new things in new environmental.For example,I can learn and spread different culture with different teachers and classmates.
Besides,I can learn how to live by myself and put up a good relationship with

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Besides,in my opinoin,the most important reason is that I am aspecially interested in English.I would like to be engaged in the work related with English when I graduate from university.The first thin...