求英语大神修改

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求英语大神修改
Hello,teachers and students,I very like Fengming High School,but I also like the National University of Defense Technology,then why not letme introduce National University of Defense Technology?
The national defense science and TechnologyUniversity is built in the beautifuland ancient city,Changsha.The area is about 350 Squarekilometers .The National University of Defense Technology is one of the key universities.From 1953 The school has been a symbol of modern Chinesenational defense science and technology

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Hello,dear teachers and classmates!I like Fengming High School very much,but I love National University of Defense Technology as well.So please allow me to introduce National University of Defense Tec...