With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have a two week holiday.求检查语法错误

题目

With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have a two week holiday.求检查语法错误
With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have a two week holiday.I really expect to it.I decided to stay at home and memorize words.However I won't stay at home all the day.I will go to church and celebrate the Christmas day with people in church.It will have a lot of fun.

答案

I have a two-week holiday.而且HOLIDAY与前文重复.或者可以写成vacation.如果你不是专业英语,要求很高的话,holiday与vacation可以通用decided--decide还没到来所以现在时stay at home and memorize words---我感觉...