求修改一篇英语作文,

题目

求修改一篇英语作文,
Everyone wants to succeed.So do I.But there are a lot of difficulties on the way to succeed and stop us from being succeed.So,how can we do?There are some advice to you.
First,you should set a goal.Because a gole can make you konw what should you do and let you go towards to success all the time.Second,you must make a plan for you a goal.This is a key to success.Due to the fact that,a plan will let you understand the next set clearly.And then,you will near to the success.Third,you have to have a never-give-up attitude.Like this,you will be succeed nearly.Because,all of everything's result come from everybody's attitude.
These are all my suggestions.I think if you do things like these,you will be succeed in the future.At last ,beliebe in yourself.Beacuse there is a saying:"There is a will,there is a way"
希望高手可以帮我认真修改,耽误之际是看看看语法有没有误!必须在十点之前,
还有,最后一句谚语我们老师说是“there is a will,there is a way”有志者事竟成
但是我看网上的都是“Where There Is a Will There Is a Way “,写哪一个?

答案

1.There are some advice中are要改为is,因为advice 是不可数名词.2.gole改为goal 是你书写错误.3.konw改为know.4.you must make a plan for you a goal中去掉 a goal. 在此处是多余的.5.you will near to the succes...