There are many kinds of jobs in the world,such as reporter,policeman,worker,doctor…and so on.But dif

题目

There are many kinds of jobs in the world,such as reporter,policeman,worker,doctor…and so on.But different people choose different job,because everyone has his own dream.
As for me,I want to be a teacher.When I was a primary school student,I didn’t know how to write an article better.I felt sad.But my teacher told me a lot of things about writing.I thank my teacher very much.After that,I love this job.I think teacher is a great job.If I am a teacher,I can teach many students to be a good person and help them to increase knowledge.I can improve my ability at the same time.
But teacher is not an easy job at all.I must study hard to know more.And I will make every effort to purify my soul so that I can become an architect of man’s soul.

答案

There are many kinds of jobs in the world,such as reporter,policeman,worker,doctor…and so on.But(最好删掉but 这里没有转折关系） different people choose different job（jobs),because everyone has his own dream.
As for me,I want to be a teacher.When I was a primary school student,I didn’t know how to write an article better.I felt sad.But my teacher told me a lot of things about writing.I thank(thanked) my teacher very much.After that,I love(Began to love) this job.I think teacher is a great job.If I am a teacher,I can teach many students to be a good person (复数 good people） and help them to increase （their) knowledge.(and) I can improve my ability at the same time .
But teacher is not an easy job at all.I must study hard to know more.And I will make every effort to purify my soul so that I can become an architect of man’s soul.
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