英语翻译

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英语翻译
吃的太多,并不会使人更健康；相反,吃的太多,尤其是吃含脂肪太多的食物,会对人体的健康有害.因此,节食是可取的.
Eating too much,especially food with much fat,instead of making people healther,would harm people's health.So to be on a diet is preferrable.
Eating too much will not make people healther,in the contrary,eating too much,especially fatty food,will do harm to people's health.So to be on a diet is preferrable.
大家觉得这两段翻译哪段比较好呢?

答案

两段结合一下感觉更好.第一段的句型好些,第二段的某些表达好些,综合一下吧 Eating too much, especially fatty food, instead of making people healther, will do harm to people's health. So to be on a diet is ...