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in some countries teenagers have jobs while they still students do you think this is a good idea
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The recent years have seen the profound of teenagers’mind .some them have found a job while they are still a student .I deem that this is a excellent idea .Because working advanced is very necessary for the teens’ future .
When teens get a job ,they will be more care about their parent .they will know that how difficult to get such amount of sarlary and how hard you parents work so that realized that waste too much from their parent is wrong .I have a job when I am a student during the high school life too .Before I gotthe part-time job ,I ask a large nunber of money from my parent and waste whatever I want .After I got a job ,I realized getting the money is not easy as I think it .From then ,I no long asked money from my parents .
Getting a job when you still a student is not only help you how hard your parents work in the daily but also can connect the society and understand how the society is now .
If you don’t get a job when you are studying ,you will be far away from the society and know nothing even though you graduate from a excellent school because you haven’t try anything except studying.A real example is that ,a friend of mine ,who studying very well in the school ,doesn’t join any commity activities or gain a part-time job during his studying time .after he graduated and begined to find a job but he can because he didn’t have any connection with others when he was a student .
Getting a job when you are students has its own benefits ,such as more cnocern their parents ,connecting the society ,knowing to control your cost and so on .I don't deny that if you don’t get a job when you are a student ,you will be a failure .
In short ,I deem that it is better for the teenagers to get a job while they still a student .

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（原文） The recent years have seen the profound of teenagers’mind .some them have found a job while they are still a student .I deem that this is a excellent idea .Because working advanced is very n...