谁能帮我搞定这个英语作文啊

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谁能帮我搞定这个英语作文啊
亲爱的琼斯先生：
我刚从海南游玩回来,很想就如下几个问题能与您交流一下：
1.所有的航班均为夜航,很不方便.
2.酒店远离景点,而且常无热水.
3.海鲜不新鲜.
盼望你的回复.
您诚挚的
李明

答案

Dear Mr jones
I have a travel to Hainan this week and just returned today.However,The trip was not so smooth,I have some questions to communicate with you if you don't mind.
Firstly,all the flights have been set at night which make the time a little embarrassed.Not only for me ,the tourists around me were complaint for the convenient.
Secondly,The hotel is too far away frome the scenic spot,That's really sucks!What's more ,I can seldom got hot water.
Last but not least,the food especially the seafood had some problems whcih were tasted weird.I would query the fresh.
I hope you can take my suggestions and I am looking forward for your early reply.
yours sincerely
LI Ming