假设你叫王圆，你现在是一名九年级学生,你遇到了一些问题，不知如何解决。你要写信告诉刘老师，希望他给你提一些建议。请根据表格内容并适当发挥，写一封100词左右的信

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假设你叫王圆，你现在是一名九年级学生,你遇到了一些问题，不知如何解决。你要写信告诉刘老师，希望他给你提一些建议。请根据表格内容并适当发挥，写一封100词左右的信。

问题	学习和兴趣爱好难平衡	压力大
现象	爱好多，如…… 但是……	来自老师	来自父母	来自自己
		要求严 作业多	要高分	…… （如想要成为班上最优秀的学生）
我的想法	多穿白色的衣服来减少压力，但不是非常有用。 希望刘老师尽快回信，给你提供建议和帮助。

Dear Mr Liu,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don’t know ___________________________
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Yours sincerely
Wang Yuan

答案

Dear Mr. Liu,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don’t know how to deal with it.
I have a lot of hobbies, such as playing volleyball, drawing. However, I am so busy that I can’t find time to do the things I want to do. I can’t achieve a balance between study and hobbies. I really feel bad. I often feel stressed. One main cause of stress is too much homework. Also, my parents are strict with me in my study. They hope that I can get high marks. Of course, I want to be a top student in my class. I want to reduce stress by wearing white, but it doesn’t work.
What should I do? I hope you can offer me with some suggestions. They will be great value to me. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Yuan

解析

试题分析：这篇作文主要内容为以王圆的身份写信给刘老师，说明你在生活中遇到的问题，向刘老师求助。表格中有详细的要点，问题是什么，原因是什么以及自己的想法。信的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要注意首尾看连贯。另外我们需要用正确的英语句子将表格内的内容表达出来，可有适当发挥。通过分析可知本文主要用一般现在时，第一人称来表达。写作时要用较好的短语和句型，以使行文连贯，富有条理。
【亮点说明】这篇短文将表格中的所有内容均正确的表达出来，要点全，人称和时态也都正确，没有语法错误，有逻辑。文章中出现的比较好的句子或短语有：I don’t know how to deal with it.、 I am so busy that I can’t find time to do the things I want to do 、One main cause of stress is too much homework 、Also, my parents are strict with me in my study. 、I hope you can offer me with some suggestions等。文章整体表达流畅，富有条理，是一篇优秀的作文。