上周， 你们班召开了“校园节约从我做起” 的主题班会。大家讨论了校园常见的浪费现象：洗手后不关水龙头；离开教室时不关灯；用笔记本打草稿—— 等浪费纸张和学习用品

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上周， 你们班召开了“校园节约从我做起” 的主题班会。大家讨论了校园常见的浪费现象：洗手后不关水龙头；离开教室时不关灯；用笔记本打草稿—— 等浪费纸张和学习用品；饭后乱扔饭菜。请你针对这四种现象以班级名义写出一份倡议书。
要求：
1.词数：80左右。提示：水龙头，water tap
2.倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入中词数。
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
Dear teachers and schoolmates,
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school!
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
Class 1 Grade 9

答案

Dear teachers and schoolmates,
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school! We students often leave the taps on after cleaning our hands, and leave lights on when we leave. In the classroom, we often see a lot of paper is wasted. At the dining hall, we can see food left on the tables after meals.
I think we should save water and electricity. We should make good use of our school things. Don’t throw food away. Let’s try to make a good habit and save things around us. Let’s do it from now on!
Class 1, Grade 9

解析

这篇作文式以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。注意用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，以下几句话是这篇作文的亮点：We are sorry to see so much waste in our school!不定式的用法。we often see a lot of paper is wasted. 被动语态的用法，We should make good use of our school things.固定短语的用法。只要同学们平时注意积累，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。