Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to make...feel happy ” 以《我想使……高兴》
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Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to make...feel happy ” 以《我想使……高兴》为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。 (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。) Suggested phrases and expressions(词组): not afford to buy...; spend ...doing something with somebody; bake something for somebody; make one’s own present(s) ; become healthier I’d like to make _____________ feel happy _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ ______ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ |
答案
I’d like to make _my mother_ feel happy Mother love is so great and selfless that ①I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return. ②With the approach of Mother’s Day, I want to ③extend my gratitude to my dear mom. Since as a student, I can’t afford to buy something expensive, such as perfume, clothes, I have decided to make my own present. ④Hard as I tried, ⑤it’s never easy to bake a perfect cake for the first time. After finishing my homework, I have spent most of my time practicing baking with my father these days. I just can’t wait to share the gift for her and see the big smile on her face. |
解析
试题分析:现在普遍的情况是学生会写议论文,因为有套路可循。但是在中考中,还是会以记叙类的文章为主。那么我们一起来看一下如何把记叙类的文章写的条理清晰。文章行文思路是:1 开篇写母爱伟大,并引出母亲节想为母亲做些什么的想法,开门见山,点题,并与时事结合。 2 使用给出的建议词组(也可不用),表达为什么要亲手做礼物,和做礼物过程中的不容易 3 以迫不及待想要把礼物给母亲的心情收尾,the big smile再一次点题。 【亮点说明】亮点一:使用can never… too… “再怎么怎么样也不为过”的句式,也可替换为can’t… too…,最经典的例句:It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。 亮点二:With the approach of Mother’s Day, =" As" Mother’s Day is coming,用介词结构短语比较新颖。 亮点三:extend one’s gratitude to/towards sb. 表达谢意,学过新二的同学一定见过,要活学活用哦! 亮点四:让步状语从句用as引导时的倒装用法。 亮点五:it’s never easy to do =" it’s" difficult to do,有的时候只需要转一个弯,句式就会富有变化。强调了自己做礼物给妈妈的不容易,更凸显礼物珍贵。 |
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