短文改错。     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加

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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
     增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
     删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
     修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
     注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 
               2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a
single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate
often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that
disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position,
I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same
building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me
the favor.
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                  Li Ming
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答案

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room
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in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night,
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made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your
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attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me
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is∧get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would
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be gratefully if you could do me the favor. 
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     Best wishes. 
                                                                                                                                   Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                    Li Ming