.第II卷第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。

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第II卷
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误设计一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Welcome to our English Corner. It set up about four years before. Since then on many high school students have joined in it. The students from different schools gather round on Sunday mornings, and there are also some college students or foreigners. We talked about everything we know and show interest in. We also exchange our effective method in English learning. We think we have learned much here.
The English Corner is a really addition to our English class and popular with students. Parents and teachers appreciate them very much because they all believe it is of great help to their children. If you want to know much about it, you may talk to students here.

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It后加was ； before 改为ago ；on去掉； or改为and ； talked改为talk ； method改为methods ；really改为real ；them 改为it ； much改为 more ； students前加the

解析

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第三节：完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分, 满分30分）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项。
Once there was a king who liked pictures very much. One day, he    21   a prize to the artist who would paint the best picture of peace. Many artists    22  . The king looked at all the pictures. But there were only two he    23    liked, and he had to choose between them.
One picture was of a calm lake. The lake was a perfect    24    for peaceful towering mountains all around it.    25   was a blue sky with fluffy (蓬松的) white clouds. All who saw this    26    thought that it was a perfect picture of peace.
27    picture had mountains, too. But these were large, rough and    28   . Above was an angry sky, from which rain fell and in which lightning    29  . Down the side of the mountain   30    a foaming (起泡沫的) waterfall. This did not look    31    at all.
But when the king looked    32   , he saw behind the waterfall a tiny    33   growing in a crack in the rock. In the bush a mother bird had built her    34   . There, in the midst of the rush of angry water, sat the mother bird on her nest —    35  perfect peace.
Which picture do you think won the prize? The king    36    the second picture. Do you know why?
“Because,”   37 the king, “peace does not mean to be in a place    38  there is no noise, trouble, or hard work. Peace means to be in the midst of all those things and    39    be calm in your heart. That is the real    40   of peace.”
21. A. afforded                B. offered                C. accepted            D. canceled
22. A. collected             B. planned             C. tried                 D. directed
23. A. hardly                B. slightly         C. really                D. generally
24. A. bowl                  B. mirror               C. plate                 D. cover
25. A. Outward             B. Indoors             C. Overhead          D. Downhill
26. A. prize                  B. result                C. artist                 D. picture
27. A. The one                     B. Another             C. Other                D. The other
28. A. bare                   B. fresh                 C. green                D. distant
29. A. played                B. screamed           C. wandered          D. cheered
30. A. connected           B. floated                     C. fell                   D. rose
31. A. hopeful               B. peaceful            C. successful          D. careful
32. A. regularly             B. suddenly           C. closely                     D. casually
33. A. flower                B. ground                C. tree                   D. bush
34. A. house                 B. business            C. nest                  D. relationship
35. A. of                      B. in                            C. by               D. for
36. A. protect                B. forced               C. depended           D. chose
37. A. explained            B. described           C. reminded           D. persuaded
38. A. which                 B. where               C. whose               D. that
39. A. thus                    B. even                 C. also                  D. still
40. A. story                  B. meaning            C. source               D. history

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第二节：完形填空(共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分)
请认真阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
I was caught in the war and put to prison．I was sure that I was to be killed，I became terribly nervous．I reached in my pockets to see if there were any cigarettes(香烟)，which had   36__ their search．I found one and because of my 37 hands，I could only get it to my lips.But I had no 38 ．
I looked   39 the bars(铁栏)at my jailer(狱警)．He did not make eye contact with me．I called out to him,“Have you got a light?” He looked at me，and came over to 40 my cigarette．
As he came close and lit the match，his eyes met with mine．At that moment，I smiled I don"t know 41 I did that，Perhaps it was 42 ，perhaps it was because，when you get very close，one to another，it is very hard not to 43 ．In any case，I smiled．It was   44   a spark(火花)jumped across the distance between our two hearts．I know he didn"t want to，but my smile jumped through the bars and caused a smile on his lips．He lit my cigarette but stayed near，looking at me 45_ in the eyes and continuing to smile．
I kept smiling at him，now   46 of him as a person and not just a jailer．And his looking at me seemed to have a new   47 ，too．“Do you have kids?” he asked．
“Yes，here，here．”I took out my wallet and nervously searched for the pictures of my family．He, too，took out the pictures of his family and began to talk about his 48 and hopes for them．My eyes were filled with   49 ．I said that I feared that I"d never see my family again，never have the chance to see them grow up．Tears came to his eyes，too．
Suddenly， 50  ，he unlocked my cell(牢房)and silently led me out．Out of the prison，quietly and by   51 routes，out of the town．There，at the edge of town，he set me   52 ．And without another word，he turned back toward the town．
My life was 53 by a smile．
Yes, the smile—the unaffected，unplanned，natural connection between people．I really believe that if that part of you and that part of me could   54 each other，we wouldn’t be enemies．We couldn’t have 55 or envy or fear．
36.A. avoided         B.escaped            C.followed          D.prevented
37.A.interacting        B.trying               C.shaking          D.upsetting
38.A.energy             B.strength          C.daylight           D.matches
39.A.over                B.through           C.below           D.above
40.A.1ight               B.smoke             C.accept           D.operate
41.A.when               B.where             C.why              D.how
42.A.embarrassment     B.confidence          C.disappointment

   D.nervousness
43.A.smile               B.smoke             C.call            D.glare
44.A.as though          B.even though       C.if only         D.what if
45.A.deliberately        B.thankfully          C.directly                D.immediately
46.A．certain          B.aware             C.tired              D．careful
47.A．motivation       B.belief              C.response           D．meaning
48.A．plans            B.procedure           C.accomplishment  D.concern
49.A．admiration      B.shame               C.tears             D.ambition
50.A．without difficulty B.without another word C.with reason       D.with safety
51.A．1eft            B.front                C.back             D.right
52.A．out               B.up               C.off                D.free
53.A．saved            B.inspired          C.delivered          D.approached
54.A．realise           B.adapt              C.comfort        D.recognize
55.A．love              B.sympathy           C.hatred           D.worry

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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误在该行右边横线上画一个勾(∨)；如有错误(每一行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线(＼)划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear fellow students,
Our school is aimed to build a “harmonious campus” .
As a high school students, we should behave ourselves. But                     小题1:
some students are badly behaved. They threw rubbish about                  小题2:
and listen MP3 or sleep in class. A few boys even smoke and copy     小题3:
other students homework. I think it has a bad effect on their health as  小题4:
good as their study. A “harmonious campus” should have civilized     小题5:
students. So we should be strict on ourselves. Of course, study is the 小题6:
first. But we should study hardly. In order to build a harmonious          小题7:
study atmosphere, they must develop good habits.       If everyone         小题8:
makes a contribution to build our campus, I’m sure                    小题9:
our school will become beautiful and harmonious.                        小题10:
Yours,
Li Qiang

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第二节: 完形填空（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从36—55各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项。
I think we should try to find a happy memory, something to lift us up on those unpleasant days. I"m saying this because I think I just found mine!
I had some work in Glasgow then. I was on a really 36 schedule, which meant I would have no time for myself all day. I was having one of those days, the train was completely 37 and the conversation going on around me seemed to be particularly 38 . Besides, I had a bit of a headache.   _39   quickly across the station hall, I fished some 40 from my pocket. There was usually someone at the exit   41   The Big Issue ( a magazine that helps homeless folk earn a living).
_42 the crowd parted ways at the bottom of the hall, I saw someone selling the
Big Issue. She really looked like she"d been sleeping 43 . Her clothes were 44 and she obviously hadn"t had a scrub up (擦洗) for quite a while.
As I 45   the exit, I saw that she was 46 from side to side. At first I thought maybe she was trying to keep 47 against the biting wind. But she wasn"t, she was moving in time to a 48 . I couldn’t hear her, but I could see her lips moving.
When I got closer, I saw a white 49 hanging from her elbow and noticed that she had sunken eyes. She was 50 , dirty and living on tile streets. I came closer and through the 51 of the traffic I heard her 52 the immortal (不朽的)line, "... and I think to myself, what a wonderful world!"
I bought her last magazine for twice what I"d originally 53 . She thanked me, then she 54_     her belongings and went tapping off along the pavement – still singing!
So, I have my happy 55 for the day. And I think it will stay with me a long, long time.
36. A. enjoyable            B. relaxing           C. tight              D. tiring
37. A. crowded             B. delayed           C. loaded            D. crashed
38. A. moving             B. interesting          C. pleasing           D. meaningless
39. A. Crawling            B. Walking           C. Wandering        D. Searching
40. A. cigarettes           B. sweets             C. change             D. paper
41. A. selling               B. buying            C. collecting          D. delivering
42. A. With                B. Since             C. Until            D. As
43. A. comfortably          B. rough             C. soundly           D. anxiously
44. A. ragged              B. costly             C. tidy               D. fashionable
45. A. left                 B. passed            C. approached        D. examined
46. A. jumping             B. climbing           C. rolling             D. rocking
47. A. active                B. energetic         C. warm             D. awake
48. A. dance              B. tune              C. step                D. sound
49. A. issue                B. arm             C. stick               D. log
50. A. deaf                B. lame              C. mad              D. blind
51. A. noise                B. music             C. voice               D. whistle
52. A. recite               B. compose           C. read              D. sing
53. A. expected            B. charged           C. intended          D. organized
54. A. picked up            B. throw away        C. put down           D. hid away
55. A. decision             B. memory           C. program         D. design

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第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
After read your advertisement, I want to offer     76．_________
myself for the position. I’m twenty years old,            77．_________
male, 1.78metres tall, strong and health. I will           78．_________
graduate Nanjing University this year. I have been      79．_________
learning English for ten years. My spoken
English is very much good and I can write             80．_________
good article. I have won several prizes in               81．_________
English contests. I have made a great deal of             82．_________
inventions, most of them have been put into practice. 83．_________
but I can use the computer skillfully. If I can                84．_________
get the job, I’ll try my best do it well. Thank             85．_________
you for your kindness.

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.第II卷第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。