短文改错。     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除

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短文改错。
     假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
           2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。      Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my
reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was
happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many
peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through
the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and
carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
     I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
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答案

     Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a
                                                                      1. usual
lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking 
    2. when            3. heard                                                                                                 4. shocked
to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing
                                                                                                 5. people
anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the 
                                            6. 去掉had                                                                7. and
water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
                                                                                                       8. my
     I was proud∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
                     9. of                      10. hope