假设你是李华，刚刚参加完高考，已被中国某大学的英语专业录取。现在准备利用今年暑假时间参加英国剑桥大学的暑期课程（Cambridge Summer Session

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假设你是李华，刚刚参加完高考，已被中国某大学的英语专业录取。现在准备利用今年暑假时间参加英国剑桥大学的暑期课程（Cambridge Summer Session 2014）。请写一封电子邮件给负责人Mr．Smith，说明自己的情况并询问相关事宜。内容主要包括：
1．询问暑期课程的设置情况（如：课程内容、课程数量、时间安排等）；
2．询问活动期间住宿情况（如：是住宿家庭还是学校宿舍等）。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr．Smith,
                                                                                             
                                                                                              
                                                                                             
                                                                                              
                                                                                                 
                                                                                                 
                                                                                               
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
Yours , sincerely,
Li Hua

答案

One possible version：
Dear MR. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, having finished the National College Examination. I am planing to apply for the Cambridge Summer Session 2014. Now I’m writing to ask several questions concerned.
Firstly, I’m curious to know about the courses. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Since I major in English, I would very much like to take some courses related to English literature and culture. I also want to know the schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places in Britain on weekends. So I would appreciate it if you could forward a course plan to me?
Secondly, do you provide boarding during the Summer Session? Are all the students living on campus or will you arrange home-stay?
Thank you in advance! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析

根据提示可知，这是一篇邮件类作文。邮件类作文和写信的格式类似，电子邮件一般由以下四部分组成：收件人，正文，结束语，落款。其中收件人要注意使用敬称，正文的第一段要开门见山地表明自己的意图及简单的自我介绍。第二段详细描述写作意图。最后一段一般用一到两句话结束，表示感谢。最后落款的时候注意格式。题中给出的信息要在文章中有所体现，尤其是对内容的要求1．询问暑期课程的设置情况（如：课程内容、课程数量、时间安排等）；2．询问活动期间住宿情况（如：是住宿家庭还是学校宿舍等）。这两点一定要在文章中分别用几句话解释阐明清楚。因为内容较多且复杂，更要注意文章结构和层次要清晰明朗，过渡词一定要明显。
【亮点说明】
本篇范文结构清晰，层次分明，尤其是过渡词非常明显，如Firstly,  I’m curious to know about the courses； I also want to know；Secondly等。其次文章第一段开门见山，I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, having finished the National College Examination.使用同位主语，简单地介绍了自己，第二句话和第三句话表明写作意图，简单明了。正文部分结构清晰，对出题者的要求也都包括在内。文中用不同的结构表达相同的意思这一点做的很好，如I’m curious to know about the courses.，I also want to know the schedule of these courses， I would very much like to，So I would appreciate it if you都属于请求类的语言。不同句式的转换使得文章生动且词汇量丰富。这也是文章的一大两点。