“百善孝为先"是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。提示：1．你认为“孝”是什么? 2．以你自己或身边人的事例说明。注意：1．文章开头已给

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“百善孝为先"是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。
提示：

1．你认为“孝”是什么?
2．以你自己或身边人的事例说明。
注意：
1．文章开头已给出，不计人总词
2．文中不得透露个人和学校信息；
3．词数1 20左右；
4．参考词汇：孝顺filial piety
It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China．                        
                                                                                    
                                                                                       

答案

It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.
　　Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.
　　My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.

解析

试题分析：考查半开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并简单的要点提示。要求考生自由发挥，对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成半开放性作文时，首先涵盖要点，还要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： Take … for example“拿…举例”，be used to doing“习惯于做…”， so comfortable a life“这么舒服的生活”，. Encourage sb. to do鼓励某人做…，set a good example to “为…树立榜样”，After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much  time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. 这句话用了非谓语动词， They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.这句话用了宾语从句。