阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; an

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; an

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.
"It is true that you cannot sing;" said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"
"0b,but what good is all this beauty;" cried the bird, "with such an unpleasant voice!"
"Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can"t you just be happy about what you have already got?"
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括短文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所拥有的“这一主题发表你的看法,内容包括:
(l)你或你身边的人的类似事例;
(2)谈谈你对该主题的看法。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得
直接引用原文中的句子:
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
答案

This story is about a peacock who complained about his ugly voice while actually he is very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.
The peacock reminds of my friend Mike, who is always upset. He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him, He complains he is too short to play basketball well. But he never realizes that his parents love him so much, and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the envy of his classmates.
Many people around us focus on what they want instead of what they have. As a result of their endless desires, they are often dissatisfied. In my opinion, we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much.  If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life.
解析

试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文的一大特点是词汇高级,句式富有变化:remind sb of sth提醒某人…,focus on 专注于..,As a result of由于, In my opinion在我看来, This story is about a peacock who complained about his ugly voice while actually he is very beautiful. 这句话用了定语从句和while表示转折,A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.这句话用了宾语从句, The peacock reminds of my friend Mike, who is always upset.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him, 这句话用了too…to句型, how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the envy of his classmates.这句话也是非限制性定语从句, Many people around us focus on what they want instead of what they have. we should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much.  If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life. 这三句话都用了what连接的宾语从句。
举一反三
请根据以下提示, 结合生活中的一个事例, 就“乐观”这一话题, 用英语写一篇短文。
Optimism always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure. That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenge and disappointment in very different ways.
注意: 1.不得照抄英语提示语;    2.内容必须结合生活中的一个事例;
3. 词数为100-120左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
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假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
1. 教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日英国(Britain Today)、今日美国(America Today)等。
2. 授课对象:高中生(至少有两年英语基础)。
3. 工作量:每周12学时,任选两门课; 担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor to…)。
注意:1. 字数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
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随着社会对“富二代”各方面负面新闻不断的报道。最近你校学生就“金钱是否能带来幸福” 这一话题进行了一场激烈的辩论,辩论的结果如下表所示:
正方
反方
1.钱非常重要,生活离不开钱;
2.钱可以帮助我们解决很多问题
3.钱使我们的生活更舒适。
1.金钱不是万能的;
2.金钱买不到幸福和健康;
3.过分在乎金钱就会失去人生的意义
请根据以上素材为某英语报刊写一篇英语稿件,介绍这次辩论的内容,并谈谈我们应该如何看待金钱。
注意:1.词数 100 左右
2.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.不要逐条翻译,可适当发挥,以行文连贯。
Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness.__
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假定你是李华,在报上看到北京华夏大学将于2014年2月16日举办为期一周的“中国语言文化冬令营”活动。你的美国朋友Mike计划来中国旅游并了解中国文化,请写邮件介绍此项活动并建议他参加。
2014中国语言文化冬令营
主要课程
日常会话   汉字书写 
主要活动
京剧,中国民乐,中国绘画欣赏,烹饪,游览故宫,天坛,长城
活动时间
2014年2月16日—22日
注意:
信件要包括以上内容,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
词数100左右,头尾已经给出,不计入总数。
参考:  2014中国语言文化冬令营 
2014 Chinese Language and Culture Winter Camp
天坛   the Temple of Heaven
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假如你是李华,在丹麦Denmark访学的一周里,住在Anne 家里,现在即将回国。请你给她写一封感谢信,要点如下:
1. 简述你的丹麦Denmark之行;
2. 感谢她为你所做的一切;
3. 向她发出邀请。
参考词汇:Denmark 丹麦
注意:1. 适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;保证基本要点涵盖到。
2. 词数100 字左右。
Dear Anne,  
I am writing to tell you_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
All the best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
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