请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t c

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请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
There is no such thing as a free lunch. Success doesn’t come to anyone who sits back and does nothing at all. As they say, “As you sow, so shall you reap（收获）.”
注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示；
2. 除诗歌外，文体不限；
3 .文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4. 词数为120左右。

答案

Everyone has a desire for success while success only belongs to the hard-working people. As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”
I failed in the last exam. So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything. I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. Later on, I found things got even worse. Meanwhile, a great many students made every effort to study. Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. So I made the best of every minute to catch up with my classmates. Now I’m progressing in my studies. I feel confident that my effort will pay off eventually.
My story makes me believe failure is temporary for a diligent person but permanent for the lazy. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.

解析

试题分析：考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语： have a desire for 渴望，belong to属于，make every effort to do努力做…，make the best of 充分利用，catch up with赶上， pay off成功，有回报，还有范文中的句式也很出彩：As the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.”这句话用了非限制性定语从句，So discouraged was I that I didn’t want to do anything.这句话用了倒装句，I didn’t do exercises and even attend to what the teacher said in the classes. 这句话用了宾语从句， Only then did I realize I was wrong and that success will not wait for me. 这句话也用了倒装句，. One’s efforts will surely be rewarded with success no matter how big or small the success is.这句话用了让步状语从句。