请根据下列提示，以 “Mr. Sun—my English teacher”为题，写一篇短文。孙老师是一位中年教师，戴一副近视眼镜。他有耐心，富有想象力，讲课生

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请根据下列提示，以 “Mr. Sun—my English teacher”为题，写一篇短文。
孙老师是一位中年教师，戴一副近视眼镜。
他有耐心，富有想象力，讲课生动有趣，专心致力于教学，经常备课到很晚；在他的帮助下，我开始对英语感兴趣，并取得进步。
课外和学生一起活动，深受学生欢迎，是学生的良师益友。
注意： 1. 短文必须包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 左右。

答案

Mr. Sun, my English teacher, is a middle-aged man with a pair of glasses.
He is a teacher with patience and imagination. Although sometimes he is very strict with us in our studies, his humor makes his classes lively and interesting. With his help, I am beginning to show interest in English and have made great progress. He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often preparing his lessons late into night.
What’s more, he often joins us in after-class activities.
He is not only our teacher, but also our friend. We all love and respect him.

解析

试题分析：考查提纲作文。本篇作文比较简单，介绍一个人物。而且孙老师的具体的情况都已经通过提纲给了出来，对于考生来说只需要翻译即可。在串联全文的时候要使用合适的连接词来连接，如What’s more等。同时也要使用高级的词汇和和复杂的句式提示文章的文采和档次，如范文的句子：He works so hard that he devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often preparing his lessons late into night.用了so that句型和现在分词做状语，在文章的最后可以使用倒装句的形式来加强文章的语气，形成豹尾的结局。
点评：提纲类作文的要点都给出来了，所以一定要注意要点的完整性，不要遗漏，同时要注意使用多样句式，让文章富有变化，更有层次。