假如你是李华， 你的加拿大笔友Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡瑞安的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容：自然情况1. 位于飞云

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假如你是李华， 你的加拿大笔友Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡瑞安的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容：

自然情况	1. 位于飞云江畔，风景优美，适合居住
成就	2. 经济发展迅速  3. 新建了许多工厂，住房，道路等。
存在问题	4. 水，空气污染 5. 交通拥挤
对瑞安发展的看法	6. （内容由考生自己拟定）

 注意：词数： 100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 经济economy
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Rui’an City.

答案

Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown, Ruian City.
Ruian is located on the Fei Yun River. With its beautiful scenery, it is a suitable place for people to live in. The economy has been developing in the past twenty years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people.
However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, the city should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of the private cars should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析

这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。