最近你参加了学校组织的一次农村社会实践活动，发现了一些问题，请据此给China Daily写一份稿件。要点如下：1．存在问题※废弃物随处丢弃；※文化娱乐活动贫乏

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最近你参加了学校组织的一次农村社会实践活动，发现了一些问题，请据此给China Daily写一份稿件。要点如下：
1．存在问题
※废弃物随处丢弃；
※文化娱乐活动贫乏；
※外出务工者的子女缺乏关爱。
2．你的建议
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注意：1．词数120左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．短文的开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Now, people’s life in rural areas is becoming better and better. However,              
                                                                             
                                                                             

答案

Now, people’s life in rural areas is becoming better and better. However, there are some problems worth our concern.
Very often we come across rubbish thrown here and there. No dustbins, no cleaners. Additionally, few amusements are available. Worse still , some children, especially those whose parents work outside, have formed bad habits due to lack of care.
So effective measures must be taken to solve those problems. First, it is necessary for the government to develop a cleaning system to beautify the rural areas, where more dustbins and cleaners are needed. Another is to organize more activities to make people’s life colorful. Last but not least, some organizations should be set up to help look after the children.
I’m fully convinced that only by doing small things with universal love, we’ll make our country more beautiful and harmonious.

解析

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