孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1．描述漫画内容；2．分

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孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容；
2．分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3．提出你的看法。

注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3．词数120-150左右;
4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：红地毯red carpet     铺路pave the way 
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

答案

One possible version：
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet .The son , well dressed waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet ,sweating .
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families , shouldering the hope of their parents .Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success .As a consequence , children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas .
Such a situation is of great concern .In my opinion , overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development . Instead of doing everything for them , parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves .Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful .

解析

试题分析：看图作文主要属于记叙、描写或说明方面的文章。写作前要看懂图画，确定写作要点，然后写成合乎要求的短文。一般来说图片作文分为三个部分。1简述图片。针对每幅图片写一至两个句子，也就是就事论事进行看图说话。2发表感想。就每幅图片或整体主题发表自己的一些看法。3简短结论。最后用一至两个简短句子进行小结，起到画龙点睛的作用。本图所展示的是父母过度包揽孩子一切，孩子过渡依赖父母的问题。根据文章对内容的要求，在谋篇布局时可以使用三段式。除了注意以上问题外，还要尽量使用高级词汇，而且也要注意多种句式的交错使用，以使增加文章的亮点。此外，因为内容是反映社会现象，所以在时态方面要使用一般现在时。
【亮点说明】本篇范文采用经典的三段式，结构清晰，层次分明，要点全面。在结构安排上作者在文章首段作者先描述图片内容；然后在第二段提出这种社会现象；第三段发表自己的观点。在语言表达上作者使用了大量复杂的长句，比如The son , well dressed waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet ,sweating .增强了文章的信息含量，显示了作者对语言的驾驭能力。作者还用到了倒装句Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful 。此外，短语as a consequence , in my opinion 的使用既避免了长句所带来的冗长，枯燥，使文章长短句结合，也有效地起到承上启下的连接作用，这都成为了文章的亮点。