应该有语法错误,谁能够帮忙纠正英语作文的语法错误?

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应该有语法错误,谁能够帮忙纠正英语作文的语法错误?
The summer vacation is coming to an end,I attend an English summer camp,it is very interesting,I can't forget,let me talk about the things on there.
Our teacher is from Canada,but they are Koreans,I get pink team,make many friends.My teacher is very beautiful,her name is esther.We always have some meaningful activities.We recite the Holy Bible,watching the video,the words of Scripture that I get inspiration.We also learn many English songs in praise of Jesus,I think these songs are very nice.Make the game we all very happy.We have the talent contest,the pink team very hard,although did not win,but not sad
I was there every day a new harvest,at the last moment,everyone was crying.
Next year I will also attend the summer camp!
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The summer vacation is coming to an end（,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号） I （attend=>attended) an English summer camp (+this year),it (is very interesting,I can't forget=>was so interesting that I couldn't forget（,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号）( let=>Let) me talk about (the things on there=>a few things there at the camp).
Our (teacher is=> teachers are) from Canada,but they are Koreans (,=>句子已完整表达,应用句号） I (get=>got assigned to the) pink team(,make=> and made) many friends.My teacher is very beautiful,her name is (esther=>人名首字母大写Esther).
(We always have some meaningful activities.We recite the Holy Bible,watching the video,=>The activities we had were always quite meaningful,such as reciting the Holy Bibile and watching the video.)
(the words of Scripture that I get inspiration.=> And,I got inspired by the words of the Scripture.)
We also (learn=> learned) many English songs (that Christian followers sing) in praise of Jesus,I think these songs are very (nice=>beautiful).
Make the game we all very happy.=>不确定这句话你想表达什么意思,欢迎补充了追问.
We （have the=> had a) talent contest,the pink team (worked) very hard (,although=>.Although we) did not win,(but not sad=>we were not too sad.)
I was there every day a new harvest,=> There was something new that I learned every day.
at the last moment,everyone was crying.(We were all reluctant to see the camp activities wrapped up,everyone cried at the last moment.)
Next year I will （also=>删除） attend the summer camp （+again）!