求英语好的帮忙改一下我写的一个英文小故事,

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求英语好的帮忙改一下我写的一个英文小故事,
g故事不是很难 只要稍微改一下在加些好词句就好了~比较急,明天就要交了
故事如下
I always remember the time that I have adrastic argument with my best friend Lisa.Since we knew each other,we neverhad such a big argument with her and this event almost made me never believe
the friendship.I thought my personality was kind of obstinate and unruly girl
and I never think that I make the mistakes and I always being right.But this
event changed me a lot.At first,we didn’t talk to each other.Although I knew
it was my fault to make this argument happened,but I didn’t want to send an
apologize because of my personality.As time goes on,she found another friends
and played with them.Gradually,I had no friends to play with and even have no
talk with the other classmates.But she was having a good time with her new
friends in the class.At this time,I noticed it was my own problem to make this
event.I felt very sad because I even had no friend now.Ultimately,I sent an
apologize to Lisa and she accepted this apologize.But we never had such a good
friendship like before.I felt very regret to be so self-willed.This changed
me a lot and make me never be obstinate and unruly to people.
In conclusion,I find out that I need tofind problems form myself,and always be brave when we meet the difficulty.
I always remember the time that I have a
drastic argument with my best friend Lisa.Since we knew each other,we never
had such a big argument with her and this event almost made me never believe
the friendship.I thought my personality was kind of obstinate and unruly girl
and I never think that I make the mistakes and I always being right.But this
event changed me a lot.At first,we didn’t talk to each other.Although I knew
it was my fault to make this argument happened,but I didn’t want to send an
apologize because of my personality.As time goes on,she found another friends
and played with them.Gradually,I had no friends to play with and even have no
talk with the other classmates.But she was having a good time with her new
friends in the class.At this time,I noticed it was my own problem to make this
event.I felt very sad because I even had no friend now.Ultimately,I sent an
apologize to Lisa and she accepted this apologize.But we never had such a good
friendship like before.I felt very regret to be so self-willed.This changed
me a lot and make me never be obstinate and unruly to people.
In conclusion,I find out that I need tofind problems form myself,and always be brave when we meet the difficulty.
难道这样没人来吗。其实大家可以把故事全部复制黏贴然后zai'b再把改好的we文fa'shang'lai'ji'uh发上来就好了

答案

你可以海阔天空写,也可以照书上的写