英语句子表达正确与否,求改

题目

英语句子表达正确与否,求改
the more confidence a person is,the broadener horizon and the more developed ability he will gain,so that more easly when it comes to accumulate ones' wealth,establish ones' career and attain social status

答案

The more confident and the broader vision the person are,the stronger ability he will gain,so the easier it will be to accumulate his wealth,establish his career and attain social status.