You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from lovi

题目

You are so lucky, because you can choose to love me or not, but myself only have to choose from loving you or loving you more.
这句话的语法有没有错误?总觉得后边半句怪怪的,是为了强调么?
我觉得这样写会比较舒服：
but only loving you or loving more I can choose from
望高手指教~
谢谢几位。
看来原句没错是肯定的了，只是比较冗长
我改的那句是在I can前省略了个that
but only loving you or loving you more (that) I can choose from
是这样的话是正确的吗？

答案

我认为,原句是正确的.原句后半句没有为了强调,只是用了一个choose.from的句式
而lz改过之后的句子是错误的,可以改成but only loving you or loving you more is what i can choose from.