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帮我看一下英语作文有没有错误吧!
作文正文：How to protect the animals Right now,animals are dying quicker and quicker.Animals are friends .We should protect them.But how to protect animals?There are some advice.1.Don't kill them.And don't eat wild animals especially endangered animals such as wild chickens,wild fish and even wild crocodiles.2.Don't cut casually!It's important.It's not only for our enviroment,but also for their habitat.The forest are fading away,the birds have no place to live,they just can only wait for death.And more animals too!There are many ways to protect animals.But do what I say,that's the main thing!

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Right now,animals are dying *faster and faster* (at a quicker rate than ever before).We should protect them.But how *do we* protect animals?*Here* are some advice.*First*,don't kill them,and don't eat...