帮偶看下那篇英语作文有没有什么语法问题啦!一定要仔细哦!My life in ten years

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帮偶看下那篇英语作文有没有什么语法问题啦!一定要仔细哦!My life in ten years
What will my life be like in ten years?It will be very exciting,I think.And I want to be a famous tour guide.
If people want to go to the other countries,they will not need to take the plane.They will be only need me---a tour guide.We will not have to go to the different places on foot or by bus.We will wear a very special shirt.And then,we will fly in the sky.They will follow me to arrive in some places which they want to go.They will obey me.If not,they will lose their way.At the same time,we will breath the fresh air.We will have lots of fun in the sky.
To be a famous tour guide ,I will work hard now.I will learn many foreign languages because the visitors come from different countyies of the world.
I really hope my dream can come true!

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What will my life be like in ten years?It will be very exciting,I think——语法没什么错误,只是表达有些不太地道 What's my life going to be in ten years? I think it'll be very exciting.
They will be only need me---a tour guide.语法错误 All they need is me---a tour guide.
We will wear a very special shirt.单复数错误 We will wear very special shirts.
They will obey me. obey 一般是用于遵守条例等等,可改为They must follow me.
At the same time,we will breath the fresh air.We will have lots of fun in the sky——短句子太多..We will have lots of fun in the sky, breathing the fresh air.
I really hope my dream can come true——虚拟语气 I really hope my dream could come true.
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