What is wrong with the sentence?

题目

What is wrong with the sentence?
Time is like water,always keeps silence.If you are well,my life is full of sunshine.

答案

此处有两处错误
①always前面要加一个连接词【and】理由：英语中两个独立的句子不能直接连接,需要一个连接词才行.
②my life 【will】 be full of 理由前一句是一个条件状语从句是一般现在式,主句要用一般将来式.
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