【紧急求助】Revise the following sentences.

题目

【紧急求助】Revise the following sentences.
对此题型比较生疏,请问Revise the following sentences这类型的题目该如何着手最好,如何按照题目的要求修改得恰到好处?一并请详细给介绍一下.如下我摘抄一些该类型题目,劳驾认真帮忙修改一下,我想仔细再将题目例句及修改后的句子对比揣摩一下.谢谢
Revise the following sentences.
1、The old man returning home after 8 years' absence to find that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there.
2、Hurring to the conference room, no one there.
3、Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
4、Looking out of the window,the grassland streches as far as the eye can reach.
5、A man is judged not only by what he says but also what he deeds.
1. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.——>In the year of 1840, the Opium War broke out.
2.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude. ——>He did not tell the truth honestly.
题目要求相当于根据题目所给句子的意思改写句子，使句子通顺连贯。

答案

1、The old man returned home after 8 years' absence but found that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there.时态不对2、Hurring to the conference room,but no one there.缺主语,主语不一致3、Sh...