帮忙改一篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误

题目

帮忙改一篇英语作文,看看有没有语法错误
Many people want to be volunteer.I also dream about it.But what should we do to be a volunteer?Here are some suggestions.
First,we must have a good body.It’s the most impotant thing.Next,we should be willing to be a volunteer.Then,we must be patient to others.After all,volunteer is a job to help other people.Finally,well,we’d better manage our time well.
Being a volunteer isn’t as easy as you can imagine.If you do ,do it carefully.I believe we can do it!Let’s take action!
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答案

基本上语法是没得问题的、句子也通顺
其实in my opinion：可以把next 与then调换一下位置
因为一般then会在next前面...