英语高三作文

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英语高三作文
关于雾霾的作文.1、描述雾霾天气的景象 .提出解决这一问题的建议
Nowadays,with the development of economy,more pollution appears in our daily life.All of those ,haze is one of the most seriously problems around us.If people still pay no attention to this,death will waiting for us.
Haze is similar to fog,but it is different from fog.Not only does it cause disease but also it increase the risk of cancer.Shanghai has suffered haze for many times When you are driving ,you can not see the road front.It is so dangerous that drivers may has a traffic accident because of gaze.And most people wear respirator when they are outside
The source of haze are automobile exhaust,buring and industrial exhaust gas .More car Shanghai has ,heaviest haze Shanghai has.
In my opinion ,haze problem is necessary to be solved in the near future .First,the heavily industries should be closed.Second,the account of cars should be control ,and government should encourage citizens to take public traffic .Last,the aware of haze should be pay close attention to everyone.
Only by these can we stay in a peaceful nature.It is everyone's responsibilities that protect the earth from being polluted.
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