英语作文修改.高中五句式my first day at junior high school

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英语作文修改.高中五句式my first day at junior high school
my first day at junior high school
i still remember the day i came to the junior school. it was exciting that i saw new classmates teachers and new compus. when i arrived at classroom, i found lots of students sit on their seat. i said hellow to my new classmates then we walked around in the school. i was proud that i could studied at this beautiful school.
有什么高级词汇或句式可是替换修改的 帮忙改下作文

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classroom - the classroom 要加冠词的
sit - sitting,find sb doing sth,表示发现某人在做某事
seat - seats,座位是可数的
hellow - hello
then - and then,除非then,前面有个句号或分号
could studied - could study,could情态动词后用动词原形
你的英文表达很不错的.有时候不需要有太华丽的词语的,只需要将感情用简单的词表很自然地表达出来就是最好的了.有问题交流下阿