来帮我看看这句话对吗?不对的话帮我改一下.

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来帮我看看这句话对吗?不对的话帮我改一下.
Not only does the economic prosperity increase citizen's disposal income,but it is also placing a growing pressure on people to perform their jobs and relationships

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not only..., but also...的句型可以将not only放在句首.但在这句话里,两个用but连接的句子有点不平衡. 所以,这句话这么说更妥当些: The economic prosperity not only increases citizen's disposal income but als...