请帮我检查一下我的英语作文,语法哪些有错,

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请帮我检查一下我的英语作文,语法哪些有错,
On the weekend
I get up at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning.My mother says,"Hurry up!You're late!"So I brush my teeth in a hurry.Then I eat a big breakfast.And I go to my study.Later,my mother looks into my study,she is annoyed with me.Because I play the computer games.She shouts at me,"Why don't you do your homework?"I says,"I'm sorry ,mom.I'll do my homework at 9 o'clock." She says"OK.But you can't play the computer games on this weekend."Then she goes to the living room.I do my homework all day.It's boring,In the afternoon,my old friend talks to me on the phone.In the evening,I watch a movie at home with my parents.It's "Curse of the Golden Flower"Jay Chou acts in this movie.He is handsome,I think.
On Sunday,I go to a party.My old friends in there.We celebrate Christmas.We have fun.
我们这个单元学一般现在时.不知道这作文行不行,能找出越多越好.

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On the weekend I get up at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning.My mother says,"Hurry up!You're late!"So I brush my teeth in a hurry.Then I eat a big breakfast.And I go to my study.Later,my mother looks into...