英语改错;对的一排打√错的在句子上标出在右边改正

题目

英语改错;对的一排打√错的在句子上标出在右边改正
In a sunny Sunday morning,our class organized a
trip to Xiangshan Mountain by bus.When we got to there,
a lot of visitors were already there.It is a beautiful
mountain.After warming-up exercise,we start to climb
the mountain.The boys had a climbing race,but Jin Wei
took first place.We took a large number pictures of the
excited event.Then we had a picnic lunch in the mountain.
After lunch,we went to a zoo ,in that we saw some rare
animal.Late in the afternoon ,we took the bus back to
school.though we were tired,we really had a great fun.

答案

以下答案供参考：
第一行：in 改为on 某天的某段时间,用on,in用于较大的时间段,比如月份,季节等.
第二行：第二个to去掉 there是副词,前面不用to
第三行：打钩
第四行：Start改为started 整个事件都是过去式
第五行：but改为and 没有转折之意,而是顺接,故用and表示连接、继续的意思
第六行：number后加of a large number of 固定词组
第七行：excited改为exciting excited修饰人,exciting修饰物
第八行：that改为which in that=where 定语从句
第九行：animal改为animals 前面有个some,animal是可数名词,所以加S
第十行：a去掉 fun为不可数名词,不能用a修饰
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