英文作文评改~最好给个分数（15分） Greating a Green Campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要,2绿色校园不

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英文作文评改~最好给个分数（15分） Greating a Green Campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要,2绿色校园不
仅是指绿色的环境.,3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该.
正文：The campus is where we live and study.Only in a good environment can we study and live better.So creating a Green Campus is very important.
Green Campus isn't only mean a green environment,but also a rich learning atmosphere and a quiet living environment.
iWe need such a environment to live,so we need to make effort to creat it.First,we need to cherish the environment.Try not to drop litter carelessly.Second,we need to be friendly and warm.Third,we can't shout or chase causally.Forth,we need to make good use of the resourse of our school.Last but not least,we need to do some exercise after our class to make us energetic and healthy.A good environment is the beginning of success,so let make our effort to creat it.

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dont start with a sentence with 'so'green campus DOESNT only mean...not need for a comma (,) before 'but'delete the 'i' before 'we'add 'in' after 'live' ( we need such AN environment to live IN so...)...