帮我看下我写的英语作文是否有语法 单词错误!

题目

帮我看下我写的英语作文是否有语法 单词错误!
My hometown weather
My hemetown is in southwest of China.It has many weather in Seasons.
In spring it always well.It is warm and sunny.Usually it will rainny.In summer,it will be very uncomfortabel,because it will be hot.I can go swimming with my friend.In autume,it is a goud weather,but in weater.It will be windy and feel very cool.It ususlly snow.
I like my hometown weather,but I also likr my hometown.

答案

把WILL全都改为IS,用一般时就好,不必用将来时