求专业高手帮检查下这篇文章的英语语法和错误,

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求专业高手帮检查下这篇文章的英语语法和错误,
The sound of regular vibrations which to express people`s thoughts ,feelings and life is the art of music.Luckly,music is also my major in university.Music include two parts,Vocal and instrumental.In contrast,music is the most abstract in all types of art.
The Spread of Music is not by preach way.It also by influence and infection to change the human mind subtly.So that more and more people get the nutrition from beautiful sound.Music can be classified as category of different angles
1,in general music can be divided into vocal music,instrumental music and drama music (including opera music,dance music,drama music,etc.).
2,making music and folk music.
3,classical music and modern music .
My course is vocal,it can be divided by sing method into:bel canto,pop singing,folk singing,original singing.Although I always study bel canto,I prefer the free style of music.Such as:Pop,soul,rhythm blues,jazz,etc.Classical music is also very good,but it a bit distant from our lives.Of course,as the Chinese people,folk music is flowing in our blood and soul which we'll never discarded.Many things will be betrayed in our life,but the music will not.Even if all the people around the world turned backwards,but music still whispering with us.No matter how far you have moved forward,the classical notes will still close to your mind forever.The way of life is not smooth,rough and unpleasant will also appears in your eyes,but I would not worried with the music.Maybe you can not understand this state of my mind sometimes,but I think you can do it after went into the beautiful sound.Good music can cultivate people's sentiments,relax the tense mood,affect his life and work ......or even the whole life of people.Music is indispensable to my life and an essential spiritual sustenance for me.
My master's degree is history.It is an objective fact which documented and explained the process as a series of historical events of human activity.The old says"Learning Histories make men wise".:First of all,I think learning history can be clearly patriotic.Second,learning history can know many things clearly and become a sensible person.The importance of learning history are well known and obvious.Here,I can not speak out more,so I have to dig the more discovered in the future.However,whether celebrities or ordinary people,there is no doubt that learning history is good for lifetime.As a nearly thirty-year-old "older student".It is very happy to continue study life for me.Either the music major or studying the history now,I can`t do a very thorough study,only know a little.But continue to learn and continue to listen to the teachings of the university teachers,which itself has been a great happiness."Live and learn" - learning the different categories of knowledge in the whole journey of life,until the end of life,this is my ideals and aspirations.I hope all of you could have such feelings.That`s all,thank you!

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The sound of regular vibrations which to express people`s thoughts, feelings and life is the art of music. Luckily, music is also my major in university. Music includes two parts, Vocal and instrumental. In contrast, music is the most abstract in all types of art.
The Spread of Music is not by preached way. It is also by influence and infection to change the human mind subtly. Therefore, more individuals obtain nutrition from beautiful sound. Music can be classified as category of different angles
1. In general music can be divided into vocal music, instrumental music and drama music (including opera music, dance music, drama music, etc.).
2. Making music and folk music.
3. Classical music and modern music.
My course is vocal; it can be divided by sing methods into: bel canto, pop singing, folk singing, and original singing. Although I always study bel canto, I prefer free style, such as Pop, soul, rhythm blues, jazz, and etc. Classical music is also brilliant, but it’s distant from our lives. Of course, as a Chinese, folk music is flowing in my blood and soul which we'll never discard. Many things will be altered in our life, but the music will not. Even if everyone in the world changes, music is still whispering with us. No matter how far you have moved forward, the classical notes will still close to your mind forever. Life is not smooth, but rough and unpleasant; though I would not worry with the music. Maybe you cannot understand this state of my mind sometimes, but I think you can do it after went into the beautiful sound. Good music can cultivate people's sentiments, relax the tense mood, affect his life and work ... ... or even the whole life of people. Music is indispensable to my life and an essential spiritual sustenance for me.
My master's degree is history. It is an objective fact which documented and explained the process as a series of historical events of human activity. The old says “Learning Histories make men wise": First of all, I think learning history can be clearly patriotic. Second, learning history can know many things clearly and become a sensible person. The importance of learning history is well known and obvious. Here, I cannot speak out more, so I have to dig the more discovered in the future. However, whether celebrities or ordinary people, there is no doubt that learning history is good for lifetime. As an "elder student” approaching 30, it is satisfying to me to be able to continue study. Either the music major or history major I’m currently in, I can`t do a very thorough study, only a little. But continue to learn and continue to listen to the teachings of the university teachers, which itself has been a great happiness. "Live and learn" - learning the different categories of knowledge in the whole journey of life, until the end of life, this is my ideals and aspirations. I hope all of you could have such feelings. That`s all, thank you!
我看了下.中间有点蒙,但是大概意思表达出来了.句子结构,和句型多样化需要加强.