我即将参加的小学英语老师面试,帮我看看这么写可不可以.

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我即将参加的小学英语老师面试,帮我看看这么写可不可以.
Good morning everyone!It’s really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview,I hope I can make a good performance today.I’m confident that I can succeed.Now I will introduce myself briefly.
I am 28 years old ,born in Jiangsu Province.
I was graduated from XX University.My major is biology.I got my bachelor degree and teacher certification after my graduation in the year of 2008.
I spend most of my time on study.I have passed College English Test Band 6 and got Intermediate interpreter certification during my school time.
In July 2008,I began working for XX High School in Wujiang.As a head teacher,my obligation is teaching senior high school students biology and doing class management.Each March I help Grade 11 students pass the graduation exam organized by Jiangsu Education Department.Sometimes I also need to help foreign teachers to finish bilingual education.
As you can see I am young and open-minded,so it is easy for me to

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口语里其实没那么多讲究,只要别人听起来顺畅就可以了,所以可以相对简单一些.供参考Good morning everyone! It’s really my honour to have this opportunity for an interview today. I hope and I am confident th...