那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类

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那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类
The journey was long and tired.We left London at five and spent hours to traveling on the train.We had traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when we are crossing Wales,so we could see nothing in the window.When we finally arrived,nearly everyone were sleeping.As soon as the train stopped,everybody came to the life,talking their bags or rushing onto the platform.While we were getting off the train it was an announcement that the train have not arrived yet from Ireland and there had been a delay.

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The journey was long and tiring.We left London at five and spent hours traveling on the train.We traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when we are cro...