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IN MANY COUNTRIES,TRADITIONAL FOODS ARE BEING REPLACED BY INTERNATIONAL FAST FOOD.THIS IS HAVING A NEGATIVE EFFECT ON BOTH FAMILIES AND SOCIETIES.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Social researchers frequently argue that eating international fast food would not be essential for the improvement of society.The question,however,remains:what would be the real effect,on the individual and on society,of international fast food?In fact,some studies conclude that people can not achieve better if they eat fast food,also more than this is detrimental to their own body.
There are two areas of concern that must be addressed in assessing any proposal to it,the healthy impact and impact on society.The most important point to stress is that,admittedly,traditional food may lead to some side effects.Fortunately,the negative effects of traditional food can be mitigated,through sensitive development and the support of government,traditional food in many places are particip

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