求改雅思作文

题目

求改雅思作文
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We can get knowledge from news,but some people think we can't trust the journalist,What do u think?And what do you think is the important qualities that a journalist should have?
For most of us ,media play an important role in our daily life ,we can known many current events through them .However there are many arguments on the attitude we hold towards the media.Personally,I agree with the point of view that we should not trust the journalists totally ,not the opinion that we should not trust them anymore.
Admittedly ,the issue happened recently threaten the honest of the press.Case in point ,many electronic media are inundated with media hype,misleading many people,just for two purpose :Let a person become famous or let the media itself become popular.These behaviors has rendered the society a materialistic circle,which do harm to every respect around us.
Though many disadvantages,I consider that the advantage of trust media far outweigh.Indeed,many journalists are objective and balanced,from which we can know current affairs even some scientific news about out life.It is essential that we should know the know things happened outside ,which helps us keep peace with the situation.Otherwise ,the media nowadays can reveal many things which can not be fing outside by the public.If we do not trust these news ,how can we fight the dark side of the community?Meanwhile,I believe that most of the reports are focus on bringing us objective information instead of sensationalize things.Only by these can they do their job continuously .Based on some events of the journalists’ experience ,under no circumstance will some reporters misleading the public .There are many people uphold the baseline of morality ,which can ensure the reliable of some events.
To sum up.I think we should not believe everything on the newspaper website and so on,but the view that we should not believe them totally is too absolutize.

答案

media play is an important role we can know .However,and we hold I agree with the point which we should .晕了 我水平太差