谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?

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谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?
Our Chinese have two thousandsyear’s history.And we have some traditional festivals.Such as Spring Festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,The national Day and The Mid-Autumn Festival.
Today I will talk about one of themost important holidays for Chinese people.It is The Mid-Autumn Festival,usually celebrated in September or October.The students and some workers willget 3 day’s holiday.On this day,some people choose to travel with some goodfriends and some people will get together with families and have a nice meal.
Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festivalbecause in the evening,I can enjoy the full moon.The moonlight usually very bright,I can also eat delicious moon-cake.Some elder will tell the interesting storyto me about The Mid-Autumn Festival.
As a Chinese student,I think wehave the responsibility to protect our traditional custom and make it glorifyto the whole world.

答案

1 Our Chinese have a history of two thousand years
2 The national Day不是传统节日
3 for（to） Chinese people.
4 usually celebrated in September or October.改成fell on 15th day of 8th month in lunar calendar
6 it was classified as a public holiday,so The students and some workers willget 3 day’s holiday
5 in the evening,后面的改改吧.the bright moon hangs in the sky,明月高悬 family members reunite and enjoy the moon together 人们合家团聚,共赏明月
6 our traditional custom(S)