紧急!麻烦帮我修改下这篇英语作文!

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紧急!麻烦帮我修改下这篇英语作文!
One day i was reading in the school reading room.
My classmates Tim and Jim was coming the reading room.
They talked and laughed too loud.Such quiet room was breaken by them.The reading room was filled with their noise.
Everyone felt so uncomfortable.
The librarian asked them not to make any noise,but they wouldn't listen.
他们坐在我旁边的座位上又说又笑（麻烦好心人帮忙翻成英文 尽量幼稚点的语法）
Because I want to be polite.They didn't know I was annoyed.
So they went on talking and laughing loudly.
I can't stand ,and I left the reading-room.

答案

One day I was reading at the school's reading room.My classsmates Tim and Jim came to the reading room.They talked and laughed too loudly.Such a quiet was broken by them.The reading room was filled with their noises.Everyone felt so uncomfortable.The librarian asked them not to make any noise,but they didn't listen.They talked and laughed at the seat beside me.They didn't know that I was annoyed,because I want to be polite.SO they kept on talking and laughing loudly.I can't stand for it,so I left the reading room.