能帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误吗?

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能帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误吗?
In nowadays,it is commonly believed that our children should receive formal education as early as possible,thus many parents start teaching their children textbook knowledge when the children are only two or three years old.However,does the child really need formal education that early?As for me,the answer may be negative and there are two main reasons that I will outline below.
First of all,as we all know that the games is children’s nature,and by playing games children can develop various kinds of abilities which are especially important for them in the future.For example,a child may acquire the sense of team spirit and the ability of leadership through playing team games with other kids,such as basketball and football.When they are playing these kinds of games they have to corporate with each other and to listen to the leaders of their team to win the games and this is quite the same as their work in the future.
Secondly,games can dramatically improve

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第一行,nowadays就可以了,不用in nowadays第二段,第五行,corporate不是合作的意思,改为cooperate第三段,第二行tend 前的are 去掉第三段,第三行,该为are used to staying最后一段,第一行,theirs 改为their还有,既然是...