考研英语小作文,大家帮我看看能得几分,真心纠结

题目

考研英语小作文,大家帮我看看能得几分,真心纠结
题目我看成了邀请外国朋友,所以语言态度不怎么尊敬.还有几个语法错误
my dear friend.
i cant wait to recommend you an exciting news that in next week,a XXX contest will be hold in our university.based on your basic-English skill and extraordinary communication,i think you can to be a judge for this contest.
The contest will be hold at Teaching building 5. In that day,many elite students will attend.Thus,you have the responsibility to assure this contest holding in a fair atmosphere.At the end of contest, you will decorate prize to the winner.If you are free,please contact with me at telephone number 12345678at any time.
IM looking forward to your reply.
yours sincerely
liming

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