英语达人们,谁能帮我把这段英文中的语法,时态,动词和复合句使用的错误修改过来,

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英语达人们,谁能帮我把这段英文中的语法,时态,动词和复合句使用的错误修改过来,
There is a new element at the end—his beating heart,which he has reawakened through his relationships with Maria and with the guerrilla fighters.Maria’s bitter talk and warm longing for love,Pilar’s memories of once violence,these memories and psychological expressed character’s history screen of their own life,but they were not express the history screen independent,the center was “present”,closed with realistic.Hemingway used life screen of every character,through psychological space expressed realistic space,put the characters together,formed the pattern “three point on the line to one point”.It is worth mentioning that Hemingway did great effort on the character who had decisive significance,Robert Jordan was the most important character in the novel,in the development process of whole novel,he usually had section by section interior monologue and memories,through these put Robert Jordan and other character together,the pattern “three poi

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