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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.
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The recent years have seen the profound changes of television system ,during which a growing nunber of people consider that the television has destroyed connection between friends and family.Manwhile,still some deem that there is nothing negative inflluence about it .I side with the former .As I see it ,Television is badly to commnunication among the people around us.
Television will make a good friend change into a stranger .Also ,the television is so charming that we can not control ourselves to stopping watching it..If we watch it too much without going out with our friends to do some outdoor activities ,the friendship among our friends will becoming much worse and worse .For example ,I possessed a good friend in my class many years ago who was very friendly to others before he has addict to the Television progamme .As time went by ,he

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在从句等长句的应用,文章的整体结构方面意识很好.但是细节,如单词的拼写,词组的使用方面稍有不足有待进步.如有心注重,假以时日,必有所成